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5 RFP Mistakes That Cost You the Contract

TL;DR: Most proposals don't lose because the company wasn't qualified. They lose because of avoidable process mistakes — generic summaries, missed compliance items, recycled boilerplate. Here are the five most common ones and how to fix each.


I've reviewed hundreds of RFP responses over the years — as a consultant, as part of evaluation committees, and while building proposal tools. The painful truth is: most proposals don't lose because the company wasn't qualified. They lose because of avoidable mistakes.

Not edge cases. Not bad luck. The same five mistakes, over and over again.

If you're new to the RFP world, you might want to start with our complete guide to what an RFP actually is before diving in. Already familiar? Let's get into it.


1. Answering the Question You Wish They Asked

This is the most common one, and it's subtle. The RFP asks: "Describe your approach to data migration, including timelines and risk mitigation." What the vendor writes: three paragraphs about their proprietary migration tool and how many successful migrations they've done.

Sounds relevant. But it doesn't answer the question.

They didn't describe their approach. They didn't give timelines. They didn't mention risks. They talked about themselves instead of responding to what was actually asked.

Why it happens

Teams reuse content from previous proposals. Someone pulls the "data migration" section from last quarter's bid, tweaks the client name, and moves on. The problem is that every RFP asks things slightly differently, and evaluators score against their criteria, not yours.

How to fix it

Read each question twice. Underline the specific asks. Then check your draft against those asks — literally, one by one. If the question has three parts, your answer needs three parts. It sounds tedious. It is. But evaluators use scoring rubrics, and if you miss a sub-question, you get a zero on that portion. Not a lower score — a zero.


2. The Generic Executive Summary

The executive summary is the first thing evaluators read. For many of them, it sets the tone for the entire review. And yet, most executive summaries read like they were written for no one in particular.

"Acme Solutions is a leading provider of innovative technology solutions with over 15 years of experience serving clients across multiple industries. We are committed to excellence and delivering measurable results."

That sentence could be from literally any company responding to literally any RFP. It says nothing. It commits to nothing. It's wallpaper.

Why it happens

The executive summary gets written last, when everyone is exhausted and the deadline is in four hours. Or it gets written first by someone senior who hasn't read the RFP in detail. Either way, it ends up generic.

How to fix it

Your executive summary should pass the "name swap" test. If you can replace your company name with a competitor's and the summary still works, it's too generic. Mention the client's specific challenge. Reference their language from the RFP. State your key differentiator for this particular opportunity — not your general company pitch. Two sharp paragraphs beat two fluffy pages.


3. Ignoring the Evaluation Criteria

Most RFPs tell you exactly how they're going to score your proposal. Section 4.2, Evaluation Criteria, right there in the document. Price: 30%. Technical approach: 40%. Past performance: 20%. Small business participation: 10%.

And yet, teams routinely spend 80% of their effort on the technical approach while barely addressing past performance. Or they bury their pricing rationale in an appendix when cost is weighted at 40%.

Why it happens

Technical teams write what they know. Engineers want to talk about architecture. Consultants want to talk about methodology. The evaluation criteria get read once during the kickoff meeting and then forgotten. Nobody maps their effort to the scoring weights.

How to fix it

Print out the evaluation criteria. Put them on the wall. Before you finalize any section, ask: "How will this score against the stated criteria?" If past performance is 20% of your score, it deserves 20% of your attention — real case studies, specific metrics, named references. Not a logo wall and a sentence about "extensive experience." Allocate your effort proportionally to the weight.


4. Death by Boilerplate

There's a special kind of proposal that's 80 pages long, technically compliant, and completely unreadable. Every section starts with a company overview. The same three customer testimonials appear four times. There are fifteen pages of org charts and certifications that nobody asked for.

This is what happens when proposal content gets assembled instead of written. Someone opens the content library, grabs blocks, and drops them in. The result is a document that's clearly not written for this client, this project, or this moment.

Evaluators can tell. They review dozens of proposals. They know what boilerplate looks like. And it signals something uncomfortable: this vendor didn't care enough to write something real.

Why it happens

Time pressure. When you're responding to three RFPs simultaneously with a team of four, customization feels like a luxury. The content library exists specifically to save time. And it does — but there's a difference between reusing a well-written section as a starting point and pasting it in unchanged.

How to fix it

Boilerplate is fine as a foundation. Start with your library content, then rewrite the first and last paragraph of every section to connect it to this specific opportunity. Reference the client's industry, their stated goals, their timeline. Even small touches — using their terminology instead of yours, mentioning their location, acknowledging a constraint they raised — make a proposal feel written rather than assembled. It takes an extra hour. It's worth it.


5. Missing the Compliance Checklist

This is the one that hurts the most, because it's entirely mechanical. The RFP says: submit three copies, use 12-point font, include a signed cover letter, provide references on Form B-7.

You submit a brilliant proposal — technically superior, competitively priced, beautifully written — and it gets disqualified because you used Form B-6 instead of B-7. Or because you submitted two copies instead of three. Or because the cover letter wasn't signed by an authorized officer.

I've seen it happen to companies that would have won. Government RFPs especially are ruthless about this. "Non-compliant" means your proposal goes in the bin, unread.

Why it happens

The submission requirements are usually in the least exciting part of the RFP — the administrative section. People skim it. Or they read it once, early on, and then forget a detail during the scramble before deadline. Nobody owns the compliance check as their specific job.

How to fix it

Before you start writing a single word of your proposal, build a compliance matrix. (Our RFP response template includes a ready-made checklist you can use.) List every requirement from the RFP — page limits, formatting rules, required forms, submission method, deadline, required sections. Assign someone (ideally not the main writer) to own that checklist. Do a compliance review 48 hours before submission, not 48 minutes. The most brilliant proposal in the world is worthless if it gets thrown out on a technicality.


The Common Thread

Look at these five mistakes. None of them are about lacking expertise or having a bad product. They're all process failures — rushing, reusing without reviewing, not reading carefully enough, not allocating effort strategically.

That's actually good news. It means you can fix them without hiring more people or changing your offering. You need better process, better discipline, and — when the volume picks up — better tools to keep things organized.

The companies that win consistently aren't always the biggest or cheapest. They're the ones that take the process seriously. If you're looking for a place to start, BidScribe was built for exactly that kind of team.

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